I'll trade critiques. Mostly, I want to get better, and the only way to do that is to get as many opinions as possible. I may not always agree with everything that someone says, but I promise to always think about it.

viewtopic.php?f=95&t=18071&view=unread#unread

Outstanding work.. I love the way you compare and contrast New York and Las Vegas. You are extremely descriptive and you make your story flow well, like I was watching a movie.

The literary nod to the way different stories treated princesses was great. It's refreshing for someone to recognize classics from the past and to see past the spin Disney put on stories in the later years. The original stories weren't so nice and didn't always end up as a happy ending.

The action was a bit brief, but once again descriptive (I am guilty of that from time to time myself) I also liked the Kitten part..

All in all. I really like it.. Keep going.